Describing a scene (a fight in public)

The sight of blood could be seen. Red drops of blood started to drop onto the floor. The smell of blood could be smelled from miles away. A crowd had started to gather around the fight. The two men were in their early 20s, with tan complexion and very broad shoulders. Both of them were struggling to continue to fight. Both men were trying to carry on, neither wanting to lose. Both of them had blood streaming out of their mouths. They looked badly wounded and needed a hospital. However, it looked as if their pride stopped them from doing so. As they say, pride comes before a floor. Both of them gave each other a final blow before landing on the floor, unconscious. The crowd cheered wildly, wanting to see more action. However, when it seemed that they were not going to continue fighting, the crowd started to clear, and no one helped the two men to ask for help on their wounds. As the evening started to take it’s place, these two men lay there, unconscious.