Describing a scene (an evening on a beach)

It was a sunny evening. I felt the heat of the sun burning on my skin. I could smell the smell of the smoke coming out of the barbecue pit. The rays of the sun made the sky go orange. The sea was blue-green. The soft waves could be heard as they crashed onto the shore. Screams of laughter could be heard as the children splashed in the water playfully. Many people could be seen sunbathing in the sun. Wanting to stay at the beach, many kids gave wails, trying to convince their parents to let them stay on the beach. The shore was starting to clear up, with many people packing up their things, ready to go home. The smell of the suntan lotion was so strong that you could smell it meters away from the shore. The sun was going down, and the sea turned orange, as darkness began to take it’s place.